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Old 12-20-03, 03:11 AM   #6
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fgee

your challenge is so distant...ur just not the winning sort
he'd go to any length to beat me...and still end up short
1st blah, 2nd kinda old concept-wise

ah hell...Allegory tops Rb as the best... but i dont give a fuck
cos thats before he turned the chart ...the right way up
1st was descent, but poor follow-up

i cudnt believe how much u suck...then i saw ur past text..
passed audio, and anything else hip hop on the net!
bleh, not feelin it

give it a rest...im afraid Gorys' eating me up...but not with a pen
cos he's the cannibal emcee...with a taste for men
1st descent hittin punch

and before aisle 5 went and got banned....Allegory was on the verge
of coming last now you're just glad.... you cant come third!
another descent one, yay

fuck this i cant be assed seriously...ive got writers block
and im smashing it on your behalf...leaving your head rocked
not good for a last line




Allegory

..what to do?..im comedical..fgee i'll smash u-
everyones laughing with me..why?..cuz im laughing at u!!-
blah, kinda weird

..your past due...an example-lacking of elevation,herb-
easy to tell..styles still the same..9 months after he registered!-
i chuckled

..ya heard?..your info is bland, who are you...damn it...
& it was hard digging up dirt..considering..yer older than it!!-
another funny

..Gory's landin it..lit..lucky registration dates show in yer game-
cuz its not obvious yer a vet...why?...just re-read your name!!-
another weird set up thingy

..shot yer fame...blabberin back flips...minds doin crunches-
& this kids lines are about as played..as RB porno punches!!-
i didnt get it actually

..i'll run this...weak...this kids desperate for winning notions-
kid stepped foot n K-bees..just to try & toy with my emotions!-
too topical sounding, blah

..n love wit lotion..fgee's social life is separated,the girls stay far-
& its said..when yer last shot at Greatness...was in a gay bar!!-
i remember a line with this same shit, booo

.....yer old...i'll backhand ya ego, and i'll..dent yer dome-
send u back to retirement..better yet..a retirement home!!-
better then fgee's last

Overall
i think Allegory won with more consistent punches, fgee had a bland moment or something. But i suspect that one line but i dunno if its just cause its an old concept or not.
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