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Old 12-20-03, 10:32 AM   #14
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AK-MIXA

hardly any fo ur shit rhymed man.... 'FLY' and 'Miracle', incase you didnt know.... do not rhyme

it wud of been a good verse if it had rhymed
not a bad structure, couple of nice punches in there....

LYRICAL KILLER

u dont need to explain each line at the end of it..... stop that now!
urz was pretty basic, but it all rhymed, and thats why you win!

vote - Lyrical Killer

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