though im not really feelin the centered verse thing....highku take sthis one,

better vocab, punches....flow--better rhyming words in general

bling your punches didnt really land....and u cant just make up the word "COFF" instead of coffin just cuz it rhymes kid...
and your rhyme scheme fell off twice...wasnt feelin it

overal: high

hit this up both of u wit an honest one. its a good battle.

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