illness man this was really really good nice flow, vocab etc.

Order of quality in verses:
Fgee
Edicius
Twizzle Stix
Potent

Fgee

The false hope of dreams cast shadows in my head
Elusive silhouettes tantalise my mind before playing dead
The darkness shed or has it just evolved into another form?
Magicians tricks born to fool my perception and scorn
^ very nice

Edicius

Power of survival was injected but the flower on arrival died
cuz it was reflected as in a mirror of being rejected,&yes i cried
but fragile devotion controlled& a unstable emotion ground shakin
no fakin love, but yet weak to grow to its final stage,and start's breaking..
^ illness

Twizzle Stix

I see peace amongst men...Animals not en-dangered
Alternatives to pollutants...global warmings a stranger
Away in a manger...kids can sleep in peace w/ no worrys
Perverts,paedo's murderer's are all just memories buried
^ off the hook

Potent

Evade in the Fusions Of my False Reality
This Sureal Reality gives a Pulse to Amity
Close to Calamity,
But I learned you can find Joy
When Betrayed Illusions Ploy
I Craved Intrusion, of The Truth
I wandered whats Her Excuse?
^ very nice

All came well and I'd go as far as sayin this could be in legends