His structure was in paragraph for which is off because you would never write a song and spit it like that, pluss you need to show where your bars end. Neither battle verse was especially touching or good, though, but I give the vote to Canna cuz his was all together better than Freaky's...both need to elevate, even though it sounds like Cann was just droppin enough to win...Ill check more of your shit out before I judge, yo.