are you on crack? let me break down your verse..

It's pathetic this Ho's Stile is worth'less on the net he can't even getta e-loan-

.....?

I Crack hostile's mom's dome witta old school cell-phone.. n leave em foster home'd-/1

That shit was wack...now your just rhyming words with words.

Now who's owned? shit... i lowered his tone quicker then the fall of rome-

filler.

Remove that chrome!-thinkin' u Bizzy Bone..step-off..u jus another newbie clone-/2

???????????? WACK.

Merk u? please...I'd put in for negative wage...herb's like u will never age-

...wack.

Re-think...this aint a game on Engage-..my 12 gauge will break ya rib cage-/3

Decent filler.

Set em off wit gospel spit...only this 3:6(666) wont spirit but break ya hips-

Filler.

So chap ya lips....bitch....only way get vic's is when ur cock-rock equipped-/4

Decent. best line in your wack verse.

U kno u'r just another wannabee shady' who will probly talk bout Carson Daily-

..WACKEST line in your verse.

I think ive got bout 80'-way this kid bites so much u'd think he started rabies/5

Biting=Rabies lines are played. get some new shit.

Callin himself a lethal lyracist?' when it's more like talent wit both wrists-

......Wack.

It's not even a competition like hitler dealin witta bitch on schindler's list-/6

Decent. Still wack though

I could go on an continue to rip' but it's useless'like shaq's assists...-

Filler.

He call's his shit hit's?...fuk then u oughta call my spit a grand eclipse/7
cause ill erase his writts.

Weak ass fuckign closer. weaker than mine. please. dont even dare say your shit was hot. Writts is spelled writs. eclipse has nothing to do with writs...you have no idea what you are talking about. we need someone in here that knows talent.