Thread: The Welcoming
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Old 12-21-03, 05:05 AM   #3
Dev
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quite enjoyed this....despite it being in paragraph.....its an easier read in bars..but....some nice emotion in this, thought it started off better than it finished....but the flow was there and the scheme was decent...good.......pZ
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