opener: bombz
closer: tie
punches: Slightly Bombz
structure: Both sucked..
vocab: bombz
wordplay: Ntbrave1tN
overall: bombz

Vote- Bombs

don't use -'":;-~ or any other wack shit like that EVER. lol.

Shorten your bars.

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Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

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