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Old 12-21-03, 11:09 AM   #6
Bmack
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babies yawlin, women crying, men falling, all dis fightin is apalling//
from north america down to the middle east,fightin for rights when will there b peace wot is goin wrong in this world today, no respect, no love, peoples hearts av been turned away//
in the streets today small kids smoke greens and vandalise, it needs to be stopped one day they will realise//
the regulations are forgotten people need to b stopp'en, bring this society 2 a peaceful place not rotten//
george bush n tony blair optin 4 war,do they care, leavin people n property,destroyed in depsair'//

Some good realism here...

50 stopin muggers from mugging, why bounce around and try to be thugging, when alot people mug to get something//
people live in the streets and rob to live, gangs making poeple rob and give//
little wannabees bouncin around thinkin there gangsters, why tho?, just act like ya self not like wankster//
whats the need of using guns if you got a fist, most yall wannabees and when they shoot they will miss//
the goverment aint strong enuff to stop war, they cant even stop prostitutes from being the town hoar//

This verse was kinda simplisitc..decent at best

Overall: 6.5/10 it wasnt a bad collab at all kronik came real good in the beginning but you guys sorta fell off in the end...good work but a little elevation needed
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