Over Weight
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Wow, i'm kind of depressed now.
But it was nice, and short to the point.
It flowed well with you 2 togehter,
thought at times seemed a little choppy.
But wasnt bad enough to ruin the piece
Good usage of vocab, multis yaay
i liked how you both gripped the emotion
thought now like i said, i feel kinda sad
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Soft Focus
Suicide Inc.
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Def.Ill
Ghost-Writers
Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..
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