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Old 12-21-03, 02:04 PM   #6
Tsar Casm
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Wow, i'm kind of depressed now.
But it was nice, and short to the point.
It flowed well with you 2 togehter,
thought at times seemed a little choppy.
But wasnt bad enough to ruin the piece
Good usage of vocab, multis yaay
i liked how you both gripped the emotion
thought now like i said, i feel kinda sad
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