Breakdown:
Metaphors:Tied
Punches:Freeman I felt his alot harder than yours
Flow:I felt freemans More
Opening:Jshook nice job had me reading
Closing:Tie you both need to work on it but they were ok.
Structure:Jshook
Vocabulary: Freeman Hit harder with his words
Overall: Freeman nice job boi. Jshook you did a good job too.

Hit these battles up if you could like I did to yours.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99687

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...080#post1005080