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Old 12-21-03, 04:28 PM   #29
Quelude
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I give this to brendan for his great structure and witty punches. Definitely played punches but witty. McProfit came a lil raunchy and really wasn't too smooth with the wordplay. the rhyme didn't quite flow well with me. Maybe I didn't read it right who knows? but it was a lil off to me.