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Old 12-21-03, 09:31 PM   #3
Menik
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This was pretty good i thought....

Uski: your structure was good i thought...you had some good multies...your vocab was alright...the flow of your verse was alright as well..

Gene: your structure seems to be improving, keep at that....your vocab was alright as well....flow of your verse was pretty good...

The chorus was alright i thought..but overall this was a good collab...keep at it.
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