Fuck yeah man I mean you had the flow you had tha structure and well you had most of everything except there is one thing I found that wasent that great and that is .................your chorus.......when I make a chorus I try and make it better than the accual freestyle like this ..............


its not Good, its not Good
Cause u'll get Jumped in Our Hood
By 2 gangsta that Definetly Would



like dat its two short and its really not a good flow and shit ............so work on dat..................I liked tha rest though.Keep it up homie!!!

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