*first beat*

Vocals are BEYOND too low in the beggining, they get better once the verse comes in, your ennunciation on this one is mad wierd

*second Beat*

that outta breathe, squeezing a shit out voice, kills me, other than that not bad.

overall heartfelt and thats always respected, your flow is good, its the voice and delivery taht kills me, i feel as if your "normal" rapping voice sounds mad gay and you are forcing this one out or something...

other than that, decent drop

.pz.

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