I really liked what this battle came out as. Cannabarz I think you should start battling in Elevated Front Lines cuz boi you got talent. Write E that's ok that's kinda what I expected of you in the first place. You are a noob and you did alright. Really though you wern't supposed to win this. No Hate take it as Constructive Critisism Dont' worry I'm the person who gave Cannabarz his first win he merked me easily. Take this as Constructive Critisism Write E this is no hate, In my opinion you easily have the potential to come back.
The Laydown:
Opening:Write E nice job it was a better opening in my opinion.
Punches: Cannabarz. You just couldn't hit hard enough Write E.
Personals:Cannnabarz. Write E didnt' seem to have many
Metaphors:Tied. Closest person to have a metaphor was Write E but it was a simili.
Vocabulary: Cannabarz
Multis:Tied
Structure:Cannabarz short but deadly.
Flow:Cannabarz I seemed to feel yours in this one.
Closing:Cannabarz nice job you performed well.
Overall:Cannabarz

Vote: Cannabarz (good job though Write E!)
If you guys could hit these battles up with an honest vote I'd really appreciate it. Thanx.
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