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someone tell me wot was wrong wit my verse?
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12-22-03, 04:35 AM
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your lines are toooooooooooooooo long
some lines are a lot shorter than others
your punches are played
no wordplay
hmmm
just very weak overal
if you want more critique post this in open mic
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