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IP:
Erm...Better Vocab Would Have Made This Piece Alot Better...Flow Was Ok, And Structure Was Ok...Just Get Ya Thoughts Down And Express Them Better...Didnt Seem Like There Was Much Feeling Put Behind This...All Too Simplistic..
Keep Elevating Though..
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