You need to reply to 3 other Open Mics and tell what you think about it and how to improve it...then post their names here.

I'll give you some feedback...

Your piece here was alright.....structure wise was ok, it could be touched up a bit though.....you had some good vocab, could be up'd a bit though....try using some multies in this though to help it out...but overall this was alright...keep a it.

Now do that to 3 other threads and post names here. Thanks. Or this will get closed.