AIGHT--your singin is on point..not too over the top and sounds ill w/ Clouds rappin...then your own rhyme gets goin nicely and finishes w/ some air of *Blam*..for your 1st audio you did Great...but theres plenty of room to elevate...which will make you jus cut the times you were caught off flow now n then..
but all in all...Tight as hell gurl...
Aim=PsDetained ..hit me up another day n we'll get a speakin

oh yea check out Alkatrakz soundclick and Cin Laden in RB Legends...these are by far the illest audio heads on RB pz

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