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LM took this in every aspect I thought he had a better and more complx and creative verse. His punches hit a lot harder and seemed to not want to keep writting they actually seemed finished two word lines don't make a battle verse sound to good and it makes it hard to follow or create any strong punches. Da.. needs to elavate but from hat i see he has some talent if he learns how to set a good structure and readable flow.
Vote LM
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