Thread: The Rath of War
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Old 12-23-03, 10:07 AM   #2
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Hmmm...Good Structure On This Piece...Wit The Title The Wrath Of War, I Expected You To Express Deeper Feelings And Emotions...But What You Put Down Was Ok...Vocab Was Simple But Effective In Areas..

These are the puppets held by da master who has no answer/

I Liked That Line..

Overall An Ok Piece...Keep Elevating..

Check Out The Link In My Sig, And Also The Collab Wit Edicius..
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