yea i'll give to youngallstar but you really gotta learn to work on your structure and shit...you got wordplay and multis but real vets look at punches ...which you go not got...and personals....which you do not got....i wasn't feeling freeman on this one thought i seen his drop way better...freeman peep this up for me daeg tahnx...

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