son, stop uppin ya shit like a madman! if ya works is on point, then the the number of replys will be a testament to that...


peepin- quality's iight...the pop in the intro almost got my ears bleedin tho...'n yes, im listenin' hifi, an still sounds bad...but verse is cool...all the effects are WACK tho son, an the part where the beat skips, which i kno u did an editted...thing is, u need to spend more time on making ya audio sound professional if u wanna go somewhere with this rap shit...

flows like most harlem rappers...not very appeling being that everyone these days is sounding similar...i say up ya flow and wordplay more, add complexity to the verse...i mean, u got good flow an what not, jus taht this joint sounded like a whole racka diff verses put into one...
but do you...
holla back...
oNE...