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Sharp Perfection.
From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin |
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this really got your message across, strong and powerful!
i like the twist you gave this, with the kid's thoughts and all. it was nicely written, with tons of emotion. you did i good job showing your thoughts. was dark, but so real.
~Tera~
DONT HATE
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R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~
keep singing in heaven
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