Sharp Perfection.
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wow, a piece so full of emotions and thoughts straight out of a head, and still sounds so good, that can be hard! shes a good writer with lots of talent. she did a great job getting out her feelings, thats half the struggle, but made it so you still wanted to read it, all the way throu. Lots of detail, and i dont feel like i miss a beat, everything was there, no blank spaces. vocab, structure and all that i just about forgot about because i was sucked into the story. it was a great read!!!
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~Tera~
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