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Originally posted by double-0 seven
you should of posted this in open mic,
structure- all your lines need to be about the same length
wordplay/vocab- you need to use better vocabulary, an you need to be more creative with your wordpla.
use more metaphors.
i advise you to read battles, in front line, elevated front lines, an elite front lines.
keep readin battles, an then eventually you will want to battle, an usually elevation comes naturally!!
peace
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dont give advice that is wrong...plus you are hardly elevated...
he was right about the structure and vocab and blah
but DO NOT and i repeat
DO NOT!! pay attention to front lines or elevated front lines...just go read the LLL battles and that will give you a better understanding of how you should spit
don't post in here with your verse...read the rules next time post in open mic
that is all
good day.