i liked n lit ends rhyme scheme and it seemed to have more of a deeper side to it than edicius verse but i did like this collab...

favourites lines from N Lit End were

There She Stood, Graceful And Honorable, No Worries
Adrenaline Flurries, Mind State Elevates And Hurries

Laughs She Hears, Other’s Lost In The Wind, She Stands Strong
Its Where She Belongs, Fulfilment Is Here, She Cant Be Wrong

and from ed i liked

Thats it for 2nite after a shower crawls in bed&hide
$she have,she smiles,still she's broke down inside

she's letting her head sinking into the pillow & starts dreaming
About a pact she needs to close with her self about her self respect..

nice stuff

cant say anything else for this to be better