all i really can say about this is DAAAAMMN that was the best thing i have ever read from you..and you chose a topic to write on that was so unusual atleast for me ive never seen anyone be able to take suttin as simple as seasons it bring it to life like this piece IM IN AWE ur amazing yea after ya mistakes i truly think this will be legendary i just hope it gets the notice it deserves GREAT JOB MAN...god ur amzing..

my fav bar was this..
"Seasons can't cure the blind but they help them feel there way
Give a right purpose similar to thoughts on why Christians pray"

im just attached to that because its so true so real speaking on faith and i hold christian beliefs so i appreciate that all in the same

great job..only thing is spelling and lata ill point the words out for ya..... MUCH RESPECT...i would tell ya to keep elevating but after reading that, shyiit i think u already reached the top..but keep it up..

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my head is clouded with senseless doubt
but this seems to be my only escape route
so ill slither my way across the ground
to avoid my blyndedsoul from being found
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