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Old 12-23-03, 07:43 PM   #7
Diverse
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shorty took this one.......it was kind of a basic battle but memoryz you need to work on your structure, it will improve the overall flow of your verse, make it run smoother....you guys need to work on adding more punches into your verse and also personals.....keep elevating and stay up....peace
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