Thread: Eki vs Yayo
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Old 12-23-03, 09:19 PM   #13
Jes
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i thought this battle was elementary...

Yayo: your verse contains so much filter and majority of your verse is forced. your lines are stretched and your bars are uneven. you were redundant at times (check bar 4), you're punches weren't connecting and when they did, they were soft.
However, you have alot of potential for some decent punches when cut out some of the unnecessary shit.

Eki: Your flow is off, making it hard to get into your verse. your forcing rhymes as well. you did have a good opener, but it looks like you didn't want to go anywhere with it. you had few punches and they were weaks at best. all filler, you were just feeding and replying to his verse.

vote- yayo... for at least attacking his opponent

Good Job you two, work on you shit.
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