I personnaly wasnt real fond of this piece. Humurous at times but very general(basic). As far as using bigger words,.....maybe it would add a little flavor to your punches and as far as bringing a battle like that to the battle forum, not to be a dick. But you should practice. From what Ive read on this site, Emcees are real heart felt in this game and aint afraid to rip someone apart with less skill. stay focused man. Use your metaphors as an advantage.