wow, at first i didnt bother to read all of it couse it looked like garbage. then i did read all of it. man, that thing that makes so much creativity inspires me. great poem, so "awe". i love it, it mixes up feelings, almost to the point of confusing me. it was great in its own way. the vocab was on. the rhymes were good. strange format i must say but still got me with the end of the poem. this is the kind of stuff that books are made of....

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