the words flowed so well that i had to read it more than twice to be assured that i didnt miss anything by concentrating on the rhythim. the message was great, and fresh. the emotion was portrayed in such a manner that the simplest of poets could read and understand it, and yet the message was deep enough to keep the attention of the more experienced poets. i also find myself confused about the picture....well watever, the point of that was:good everything, great poem.

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