Overall a strong piece.
It contained all catagories which one would judge upon.
The flow kept goin through the very end, n almost never slacked of.
The way of writin was nice, u are able to step inside this 'world' or vision.. n 'feel' the emotion n message of the piece.
The way it was structured was good, basic nice..
Made it more enjoyable to read..never did i had the feelin' it was to long or that it dragged on.
As i said, overall very nice.