I REALLY LIKE UR WORK..so true about suicidal issues too..esp about getting ignored..people sometimes feel like this is the only they will ever get attention and then its over i really felt word for word on this and for another newbie UR DAMN GOOD keep it up..only adivce i have is maybe work on your structure for the beginning and great internal rhymin kid well keep elevatin..

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my head is clouded with senseless doubt
but this seems to be my only escape route
so ill slither my way across the ground
to avoid my blyndedsoul from being found
~*~YOU LIVE YOU LEARN~*~