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Old 12-24-03, 01:03 AM   #4
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This was ok...your structure needs some work thought, try keeping the lines all around the same length so its structured good and so it helps your flow out...you had some ok multies, try to work on those though....vocab in this was alright.....but overall this was ok...and keep at it.
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