vote-tactical.. jewish you had a decent flow, but sometimes u would go off on some totally different tip, like the first 2 bars.. didnt even rhyme.. then u rhymed the next 3 unevenly.. and your finisher didnt rhyme either, half the verse was about dicks n clits.. u need to think more about lyrical punches aim'd at your opponent.. some personals too.. try complexing your scheme a little bit.. tactical didnt come great either but he had a better foundation.. his shit rhymed evenly and had some personals seasoned with the occasional punch, closer made me laugh, so stick with it but tac got this.. vote on my shit when theunderated posts