Not a bad drop, like the kid above mentioned the structure could use a tweak. Multis were there and the imagery was on point. For a very simple structure this was done in a way that made it seem some what complex. I guess the use of multies stood out most. Nothing very complex or advanced from a metaphoric view, but the images were placed in my mind. Keep elevating and drooping your work in here. There are many skilled poets as well as rap writers in here, take advantage of what they can offer you in means of elevation.

Good read...

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