white...thought the vocab was good...helped with the flow of it...well worked sylables...but thought it was a bit jumpy..with the way ya sentences were structured.....other than that nice verse..liked the scheme..
speek...liked the perspective you came from...maybe the vocab could have been expanded on..thought the second half was better...the first seemed to be a bit of a filler.... but the style went well with the others...good contrast....good verse
emerge...another different style to the others...had a good flow going, except it fell in the middle...ya vocab was ok...some lines seemed to lack...but again i liked the scheme... so yeah not a bad verse...
overall i thought the three styles went well together....nice collab overall...all could use work in little ways..but whos doesnt?.....pZ