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Old 12-24-03, 08:42 AM   #1
Doctor Ill
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10 barz of skillz(please critique harshly)

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...791#post1013791

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...822#post1013822

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...826#post1013826

The benefit I gain from verbal expression is immeasurable to me
When I spit my game my next quetion's is it pleasurable to read?
The pleasure's all mine when I spit rhymes fluently flowin' fluidly
I treasure my lines cos they shine beautifully like golden •••elery
Lyrics paintin' my mental pictures my mind an' rhymes showin' unity
Each verse an essential scripture in the path I've chosen musically
I'm always gonna give my best wit' each verse cos I do it dutifully
I'm worth less than famous rappers but same quality like duty free
Truthfully tho hip hop's still new to me been spitten two to three
Always stayin' tru to me that's somethin' vets have gotten thru to me
So bring ya crew to beef I'm spittin' fire they jus' fuel to feed
It'll be cool to see get murdered lyrically tryin' to screw wit me
Grew up hip hop schoolin' me every track I heard my skills grew in me
But they're unproven need to show someone that they're true indeed
On the microphone I'd leave your whole fuckin hood in ruins bleedin'
Raw emotion's fuellin' feelin's everythin' I see all I'm doin's feedin'
To satisfy my appetite for new inspiration from my experiences
Which occupies all of my time between each of my lyrical appearances
A story told about the journey an' what I've learnt along the way
My very soul an' bein' is the wat my pen spills across the page
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