Ok nice complexity an' vocab but ya need to clean it up a bit remove the rough edges some of it sounded forced:

no free rides to the next oasis, photosynthesis is da basis/
of this rotten existance as we face it on day by day, cant erase it

That's an example of a bar it would have been better without

Flow was fine multis were lackin' as was an' overall focus but it was aight keep elevatin'