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Nice drop....
The flow was o.k...was off at some points but it was pretty smooth for the best part. No question that you had a complex array of vocab and wordplay here..it was played well and didn't portray it as being overused...dope..
"Transition process starts slow, but rapid growth like ivy tightens
Sprouting braches the grip heightens, to outsiders the look frightens" - loved that line....
Good topic, related the rhymes to it well, never fell off or drifted away from it..big props for that....
3/5 nice...bit short maybe..but it was a good read.
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