That made me cry! It was beautiful... You are so talented! The simplicity of the peice, yet it was intricate enough to wrap you around it as you read it. You have a way with rhythm that is brilliant, I never wanted this peice to end, because you used metaphores amazingly and placed the simplicity so well in this. I'm not a rater but I give you a 10 on this, I am very impressed with your work... peace