Thread: fuck this up
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Old 12-24-03, 01:21 PM   #8
ScorpionDeathLoc
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Hey man that was an aiight drop. It flowed so-so. If ya want ta get better though, ya have to add some multies. Just concentrate on one subject and let the pen go to work.

I give this piece a rating of 5/10, which is still a good rating. Also, add some vicious wordplay to this piece....
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