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Old 12-24-03, 02:21 PM   #2
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You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed, Thanks.

But this was ok.....structure in this was alright, it needs some work though, try keeping your lines all around the same length so its structured good and so it helps out the flow in your pieces....also try adding some multies....but keep at it.
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