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See ya.
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IP:
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life's like the Blistering Epitome of what i Came to Expect
The Head with No Neck Ritualistically Conducting Attempts At Oral Sex
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Cool line.
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Spoken Word Is outdated, replaced with Bling Bling Anthem's
But my word's Reflect Brighter futures Than Any Necklace Damnit ! ..
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Only line that I didn't like; seemed like blasé whistle-blowing, kind of.
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always figured i Wouldnt Become, just another Circus Act
I mean Aside From My Collossal Penis, I'm your Regular Whitebred Nerdy Kat
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Wasn't expecting it - I admit it, Ralph chuckled.
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and then, i'll Collapse Within an alcholic Mass of Fits
Ramblin Shit While I Pass A Fist At Pacifist
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The consensus best line it seems. . It was good, but I liked the ritualistic oral sex one better.
All in all, it was solid, as usual. Pretty much everything could pass as quotable in this depleted form; regardless, it was a nice read. I thought the change in flow was a good choice - a fresh voice in a mass of monotones. To hell with whoever said you overdid the vocabulary - you can never overdo vocabulary with good word choice. Good piece, crew. . Thanks for letting Bagels get involved, too! 
PS - If AOL didn't have so many damned legends, I would lend this link as a submission. Merry Christmas.
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. . the artists formerly known as Word Perfect . .
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