Atra Ludio or Hip-Hop?
From: Cottage Grove, Oregon |
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I don't get it.
Well... first off it had an odd, but suprisingly workable flow. I just read one word after another and it felt really smooth. There was a lot of imagry present in the whole thing too that sparked my imagination. But the last line...
For fear that within his stones he may break me too, I crumble to him…
It made me realize that I unfortunetly had no idea about what this peice was about. I still have no idea what it is about unfortunetly. It's there, I just can't grasp and wrap my incomprehensible mind around it. Especially since I liked reading this, I just couldn't find the meaning to it.
~Irenic~
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