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Old 12-25-03, 08:46 AM   #6
Straie
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nice with the lyrics.....dont ride the beat with enough emotion...u know? 2 monotone......rhyme structure fell off rythym a couple times........still enjoyed it overall, but jus work on timing a lil bit and you'll truly elevate........stay uppppp.........oh yeah I listened 2 the 2 top 1'z
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