Quotes just highlight what the ignorant don't see..
Sometimes the most simple lines..mean the most..
I find your piece almost flawless, the visions used,
To describe the situation and essence of this message..
Where exceptionally well formulated n creative..
Within this thread i stumbled upon a post by someone claimin..
Your structure was off, for a open mic piece the structure was more then decent.
The imagery was at points amazin'.
Very enjoyable.